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Coming Home by ~Mad-Jester356:iconMad-Jester356:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Fixed


Now's the time to be alone
Friends and family gone from home
I know-because I'm there
Perfect smiles left for broke
Rotting in the as and smoke
Forever-I'll be here

You left me here to wait so long
I'll close my eyes-you won't be coming home

Joy and care don't last for long
With the wind they all have gone
I know-I watched them go
Frozen here I'll wait for you
Forever sitting in the dew
'til then-I'll be here

You left me here to wait so long
I'll close my eyes- you won't be coming home

When you left me here
All was gone
You made it disappear

You left me here to wait so long
I'll close my eyes-you won't be coming home
(Coming home)
You won't be coming home
©2005-2009 ~Mad-Jester356
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Author's Comments

Lyrics I wrote during class for an assignment. They were suprisingly easy to write, the music and words came right to me. I think it's written from Balkar's point of view again. It's a much more mellow song then I usually write.

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~Little-Kitten May 19, 2005, 4:48:19 PM
i love this Kate ^^ :hug: great job
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~Mad-Jester356 May 19, 2005, 5:22:14 PM
Thanks so much! :hug:

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Do you know that every time you're here everybody else seems far away?
So can you come and make them disappear, make them disappear and we can stay?
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~marioprince May 20, 2005, 5:15:00 PM
Wish somethin would come to me so I could finally finish the third part. Good job on this by the way!

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"Even in our sleep, pain which cannot forget falls drop by drop upon the heart, until, in our own despair, against our will, comes wisdom through the...grace of God."
~Æschylus, Greek Playwrite & Poet
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~Mad-Jester356 May 20, 2005, 6:58:17 PM
Well I'm writing some more about Balkar, maybe you'll get inspired by that. :shurg: Thanks also.

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Do you know that every time you're here everybody else seems far away?
So can you come and make them disappear, make them disappear and we can stay?
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~gabugurl May 22, 2005, 11:34:00 AM
Cool! Are you going to turn this into a song? That would be nifty. Then you could become famous and everyone will love you and but into your life and never leave you alone and stalk you while taking pictures of your every move..... oO;

I like this though. lol.

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If you have a question, ask Professor Cheezumpuff.
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~Mad-Jester356 May 22, 2005, 2:15:12 PM
I would love to turn it into a real song, but sadly, I lack the talent to make music. I can sing well enough but I can't write or play music. :sweatdrop:

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Do you know that every time you're here everybody else seems far away?
So can you come and make them disappear, make them disappear and we can stay?
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~777333 Jun 27, 2008, 7:02:50 AM
This is nice... I love the way you've used the words:
"Frozen here I'll wait for you
Forever sitting in the dew
'til then-I'll be here"
Could totally imagine this as a song. Nice work, amigo. :D *favourites*

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An essay is an attempt to explain something that could have been said in two sentences:
:blahblah:
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~Mad-Jester356 Jun 27, 2008, 8:52:23 AM
Thanks for the :+fav: and reminding me that I wrote this. I had completely forgotten about it. Thankfully I still remember how it goes. X3

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Do you know that every time you're here everybody else seems far away?
So can you come and make them disappear, make them disappear and we can stay?
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